Really interesting idea and some effective location shooting - it worked really well. A good range of shots used, although I think you could have been even more adventurous in terms of the range explored (some LS and ELS to contextualise the location, for example). I would see this kind of idea working better in parallel with a performance, with a wider range of things happening (building up the notion of the main character's fantasy, for example). You need to watch the editing - you were a little off the beat occasionally and that's pretty important for a track with a strong rhythm section. I'm not sure the slo-mo worked fully considering the tempo - okay for emphasis at times, but it possibly slowed the thing down a bit overall. Well done.
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ReplyDeleteReally interesting idea and some effective location shooting - it worked really well. A good range of shots used, although I think you could have been even more adventurous in terms of the range explored (some LS and ELS to contextualise the location, for example). I would see this kind of idea working better in parallel with a performance, with a wider range of things happening (building up the notion of the main character's fantasy, for example). You need to watch the editing - you were a little off the beat occasionally and that's pretty important for a track with a strong rhythm section. I'm not sure the slo-mo worked fully considering the tempo - okay for emphasis at times, but it possibly slowed the thing down a bit overall. Well done.
ReplyDeleteWhen I was editing it all the shots were cut on the beat, i'm not sure why it has changed? Thanks!
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