I like the ending, but I think you fade it out too quickly - you don't quite get the full impact. I think that you need to make a little more of the climax (where you cross-cut between the various scenarios with Ben doing silly things) - would be better if it was cut a bit faster, to the pace of the song. I think Rachel throwing the paper in the air would work best at the end of the bridge, since it seems to lead into the climax. Digipak looks okay.
I like the ending, but I think you fade it out too quickly - you don't quite get the full impact. I think that you need to make a little more of the climax (where you cross-cut between the various scenarios with Ben doing silly things) - would be better if it was cut a bit faster, to the pace of the song. I think Rachel throwing the paper in the air would work best at the end of the bridge, since it seems to lead into the climax. Digipak looks okay.
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